Underneath this is somebody who has stopped being able to take anything for granted. It begins as ordinary misery, the kind that asks what is wrong with me and what will fix it. Then it keeps going, straight past the misery, until beautiful faces and kohl-darkened eyes and grass and cloud and wind are all being asked the same question in the same tone, as though not one of them had ever properly explained itself.
The ghazal turns in the fourth couplet, and the turn is easy to miss because the tone never changes. If nothing exists except God, which is standard Sufi ground rather than a provocation, then what is all this? He answers with hangama, and the choice is the joke and the argument at once. He describes the whole of creation the way you might describe a racket coming from the street outside.
Having taken on the structure of reality, he comes back down and ends up talking about money. The ninth couplet quotes the ordinary pious advice, do good and good will come to you, and immediately files it as the only thing beggars ever shout at doors. The tenth admits he does not know how to pray and offers up his life instead, on the grounds that his life is the one thing he has to hand.
And the last couplet shrugs the whole poem off. Granted, Ghalib is worth nothing at all, but if you are getting him free, where exactly is the harm? A ghazal is not supposed to have an argument running through it. This one does anyway. It asks what is wrong with me, works its way up to what is anything, and comes back down to a man haggling over his own price.
Talat Mahmood and Suraiya sang it in the 1954 film Mirza Ghalib, and that version decided which couplets most people know. Abida Parveen takes it slower and is more interested in the metaphysics than the complaint.
How it rhymes
Every second line closes on the same word — کیا ہے
, kya hai. That repetition is the radif.
The rhyme falling just before it is the qafiya: The -a sound just before the refrain: dava, majra, muddaa, khuda, ada, sa, hava, vafa, sada, dua, bura.
Hearing the two land together at the close of every sher is most of what makes this form sound the
way it does.